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A Vacant Home

Here’s a song for you… Just Say It out Loud by Gamma Skies🎵🎶💙❤🖤 https://open.spotify.com/track/0JK5mu3OhQ17kDnfaENqze?si=YI5dP1o8Rs2P52y5Y8p2mQ&utm_source=native-share-menu&dl_branch=1

The empty cabinets,
The deserted rooms,
The windows broken,
The corners inanimate.

From attic to basement:
Solely chilly shades and glooms.


Our empty words,
Our deserted chats,
Our promises broken,
Our trust inanimate.

From the heart and mind:
Solely coldness and apathy.

Specks and decks of dust,
Spider webs all around,
Torn carpets, shredded walls,
A foul scent of the dead.

That is what’s a vacant home,
Dead.
It might as well be a haunted house.

Years of friendships turned to dust,
“I don’t cares” and “Whatever’s” all around,
A torn past, a shredded present,
Memories of us are now all numb-dead.

That is what we have become now,
Dead.
And no one to blame for why or how.

A broken friendship

So yeah, stuff happens and good friends grow apart. It is no one’s fault and neither friend is to blame. It just happens.. doesn’t it? “VIRTUAL LIVING” and lack of conversation has made friendships very vulnerable.. You find out you have nothing to talk about. Once close friends drift away and you feel betrayed…

Soon the pain numbs and you realize you don’t even care. There is just an empty emotion for them.

But you do care.. so for the last time just reach out to the ones who have left. What happens next, I am not sure of… yet you should try again.. reach out. You might get a closure or realize you are not compatible.. but some friends are too precious to “just let go.”

Fill the vacant voids..

Comment below and tell me your story!!

32 responses to “A Vacant Home”

    1. 🙌thank you for visiting!!!

      1. I Just read this once again and this is more than a one time read is all I know .
        I need to save this Post now🙂 looking forward to you Participating in the Poetry compitition I’m hosting

        1. you are kind.. this means a lot☺❣🥺

  1. naomiclimateandcats Avatar
    naomiclimateandcats

    Wow, Riya! BEAUTIFUL! I’ve switched schools quite a lot (for many different reasons, but I’ve been to 7 schools in my 7 years of school) and often end up losing those friendships. This is such an inspirational post!

    1. 🥺aww that’s sad… I for one have been in the same school for 13 years😬 and I graduated just last week… I have lost very good friends 💔 happy to know i could help..take care🙌

    2. Also.. I was hoping if you could help me reach out to other teen bloggers/readers. Maybe you could name some website or colleagues that might like to read my blog.. if you can, please share it with me on my email- rujutakhilari515@gmail.com

      1. naomiclimateandcats Avatar
        naomiclimateandcats

        Hm… can’t think of anything off the top of my head, but I’ll try!

  2. good song on the vacant home and welcome to novels around the world and hope you like the poem and novels as it seems you are interested

    1. Thank you! And welcome to my blog as well !!
      Yes..I am always looking for short novels😁once a reader, always a reader.. Stay in touch.

      1. same here i also like reading

  3. That’s so beautifully written. Awesome poetry, you can be so magical with words. Glad to have found y out blog, it’s pretty awesome😀

    1. Thank you so much!!🥺🤩🤩

  4. So yeah, stuff happens and good friends grow apart. It is no one’s fault and neither friend is to blame. It just happens.. doesn’t it?

    I AGREE. I completely do.

    1. 🥺Aww it seems you have lost close friends as well. Hope my words helped you!

  5. Wowww… so beautiful 😍. Yeah good friends have to grow apart coz of time,responsibility and all those stuff but their friendship never dies

    1. Welcome to Hmmm Raksha!!
      ☺thank you and I really hope you are right🥺🙌
      Stay connected❤

  6. The style is unique.

  7. lovely musing! I don’t know whether i will lose people i think i will. I haven’t now. But i hope to make out the best of friendships and even reach out when I lose them. Thanks for this post!

    1. ☺Thank you! Ofcourse, we should try our best to reach out!🙌❤

  8. […] Riya @Hmmm… – Her ability to write poems and stories is just amazing, trust me! You’ll read them so many times just to get that vibe again! […]

  9. Missed your contact ping me again there

  10. Whoa… your poems are soooo good 🤩

    1. Thank you for reading them!! Welcome to Hmmm🤗🤗

  11. Wow, Riya! AMAZING! I’ve switched schools quite a lot (for many different reasons, but I’ve been to 8 schools in my 8 years of school) and often end up losing those friendships. This is such a beautiful post!! 😭😍✨

    1. 🥺🥺aww that’s tough swara!! Thank you💖and welcome to Hmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!

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