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Hearts For Sale

I am writing this poem is in parts/chapters and given below is how the first part goes..

Part 1 : A Silly Naive Boy

A silly, naive boy,
Of six and ten years,
On a business of sleuth,
Came into this harpy town.

On a quest for a heart,
He was close to his destination,
He asked this borough,
For further direction.

He asked the mayor,
He asked the sheriff,
And for every answer,
He paid its tarriff.

He is moneyed, Oh my!
A silly, naive, rich boy,
Let’s make a fool of him,
If only for some vile joy!

The silly naive boy walking down,
To west of the town square,
Through narrow alleys, shadowed stalls,
With rotten-black antiquities, however rare!

Left, right, left, and another left.
Brought him to the market’s pride,
It’s hefty guidepost reading :




continued on Saturday as a collab post!!! Excited😁

49 responses to “Hearts For Sale”

  1. That was an awesome poem Riya. Loved it!!💛

  2. i am available for a collab ot will be my first time

    1. Yayy!!😁 I’m excited!! Would you mail me at rujutakhilari515@gmail.com about ur idea!

    1. 🤘😎yeah!!!! How r u?

        1. Have had a bad day truthfully😅

  3. Wow this is amazing cant wait for part two

    1. Thanks😁
      What is ur name?😅

  4. Excellent piece. The irony is simply marvellous. I admire the way you portray the innocence of your character, and the scorn of society, and the eagerness of some to take advantage of him. Amazing!

    1. Thank you Maha!😇🙂
      Next chapter on Saturday!!

  5. This was amazing, Riyaa! Loved the way you portrayed the story, cant wait for part two!!🤍
    And tbh, you’re so true, even I’m giving exams😬😂

    1. Thank Siya!! 😁
      Best luck with your exams!! Which grade are you in?

      1. Thankuu so much! I’m in 9th grade🙈
        What bout you?

          1. ohh damnnn! best of luck for your academics💃🏻💃🏻

  6. heyy riya last exam sorry dropped a message this late!!😃 waiting for the collab post!

    1. 😂no worries.. I know you had exams .. but hey!! You are done with them now🤘🥳🥳

        1. Ayyay.. freedom😁✌ English right?

      1. btw is it normal to get spam comments on ur single post all the time😂
        which are really sweet. but well repeating😂😂 cus they have weird links attached to them.
        but they look so pleasing!!. was reading the 104 spam comments😂😂

        1. 😂OMG 104!
          I received only a couple on this blog.. but yeah it is normal😆🙄
          It sucks when some really good comments end in the spam and you don’t find it until weeks later😶 happy spamming!

          1. yeah 104 and like odd comments. except some!
            and yeah english exam is lastt!!!!! then freee – dome!!!

            1. 🙂Hope wp doesn’t spam my comments!
              How will you be relaxing after the paper?😏

              1. How about more books and well a movie????
                Oh first a long slumber😂 after returning back.!!
                nothing fancy😁

                1. That sounds wonderful🙌😁

      1. You’re welcome dear..!❤️

    1. Thank you for reading pannaga!💕

  7. Amazing waiting for next part

    1. Thank you!😊 It’ll be out by tomorrow..stay tuned!

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