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Love Gone Wrong

Hiee readers and friends and uhmm others, I couldn’t get a better title for the post, so I chose a lyric from the song that inspired this poemπŸ˜‚

I depressed the ending.. but I still hope you like it! Let me know what you think.. a bit nervous publishing this😢😢

She is his fall,
A beautiful season,
When the trees undress.

It’s the verge of October,
She can not wait to leave this city.
While he only prays they meet later.

Autumn lasts no longer than five weeks,
Yet its an eternal feeling,
Of falling, out of love

As she packs her bag, he recollects their last conversation,
When some words were unsaid, some unheard,
And the bitter ones spoken out too loud.

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The winds blow away the heavy leaves,
And prepare them for the softer landing below,
But it is as tough on the ground, as in the clouds.

Crying on the airplane,
She wonders why is everything so complicated,
And will this decision of hers numb their pain?

Once the leaves detach; no force can reverse it,
So they move on, cover the dead below,
And bundle themselves for the cold.

Now, December’s right by the brink,
He hopes she might come back home,
But “in the next winter break” she chooses to think.

And He falls,
To Their End.

17 responses to “Love Gone Wrong”

  1. […] Love Gone Wrong β€” Hmmm… […]

    1. Thankkkkkkkkks a buuuunch for the repost!!!!!!!πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ€—πŸ’–πŸ’–

  2. Once the leaves detach; no force can reverse it,
    So they move on, cover the dead below,
    And bundle themselves for the cold.
    I loved these lines Amazing poem Riya

    1. πŸ’“Thank you simran!! These are my favorite lines as well😁

  3. Oh, this was so sweet, Riya!!

    1. πŸ˜„thnxxx nehal!πŸ’•

  4. That’s very beautifully written πŸ’œ

    1. Thank you Nilesh!😊

  5. loved this riya!! really. the song and your words match perfectly

    1. πŸ˜πŸ€œπŸ€›

  6. this is really nice Riya! loved it. m ur new reader. I found ur blog niceπŸ™‚β€οΈπŸ˜Š hope to see more posts

    1. Thank u!!πŸ˜ƒ welcome to Hmmm!!!!
      Glad you found meπŸ˜πŸ’•

  7. Lovely poem, Riya! You made the form work very well for you. I also found it interesting that you wrote from the male point of view…always a challenge! ❀ All the best!

    1. Thank you,Cheryl.. hope you have a great weekend!πŸ’–βœŒοΈ

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