Hmmm…

Just Wondering…

Don’t Respond

Hello readers and glancers..

This poem is a Kyrielle (French form of rhyming poetry in a stanza of 4 lines, with each line of 8 syllables, and one repeating line)
I learned about this form of poetry through Kunjal’s poem Happenstance (from duodisseminators) and here is my ~~first~~ try..

Leave me on read or on unread,
Either would hurt less compared to, 
My hope's constant oscillations,
Please, please, don't respond to my texts.

You like me or you like me not, 
Keep me waiting till I give up,
Then ping me when I have moved on,
Please, please, don't respond to my texts.

You suggest let's give it two years,
Yet share secrets and songs everyday,
Am I your friend, crush or your ex, 
Please, please, don't respond to my texts.

I was crazy about you honestly,
But you and me, isn't in our cards,
So stop these conversations please,
Please, please, don't respond to my texts.

Ahh I love it.. but I completely messed up the rhymes 🙂 What do you think?!!!!!

Uhmm this post seems shorter than my usual ones so….. songs!

cuz I owe Mendes content to one idiot(:

🎶

p.s. Is anyone up for a collab on the prompt “An Internship At Hell”?

Riya

January 13, 2022

Poems

crush, kyrielle, Poetry, teenage, text

66 responses to “Don’t Respond”

Duo Disseminators

January 13, 2022 at 7:59 am

you actually nailed it! but there should be a rhyme scheme which is why this form cant be lengthy! but the eight syllables had been nailed!
also this was written by me kunjal not khushi😂!

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 8:02 am
  
  🥲yuh i read more about the rhyme scheme later.. so it is a bit messed up😬
  My bad.. let me just edit that😅
  Thanks ❤
  
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  1. Duo Disseminators
    
    January 13, 2022 at 8:04 am
    
    its tricky to put the rhyme scheme
    
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    1. Riya
      
      January 13, 2022 at 8:06 am
      
      😂a better try next time
      
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Riddhi B.

January 13, 2022 at 8:02 am

Oooh, this is such an amazing form of poetry- I never knew about it! I am definitely going to attempt to write it sometime!

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1. Riddhi B.
  
  January 13, 2022 at 8:03 am
  
  And the poem was amazing as well!
  
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  1. Riya
    
    January 13, 2022 at 8:06 am
    
    Hehe Thanks🤍
    
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2. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 8:06 am
  
  ✌🏻yesss best luckk😁
  
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Silver Stone

January 13, 2022 at 8:26 am

Never heard of this style of poetry, but it sounds great! Must definitely try this style out someday, it looks fun.

This was a good and a well rhymed poem on your first try! I can’t wait to see more poems in this style

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 8:37 am
  
  Yess you should try! Can’t wait for your poem.. best luck✌🏻😁
  
  Thanks ss that’s kind of you to say🤍
  
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  1. Silver Stone
    
    January 16, 2022 at 11:21 am
    
    You’re welcome!
    
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Siya Gite

January 13, 2022 at 8:56 am

Ayeee the second Kyrielle poem I’ve read now! And you did such a goood job for it to be your first time!🥺❤ Loveddd the poem, Rii!!💕
and hehe, yes you do owe me mendes content🤭🤭 and you added Why😭😭😭😭 I loveee youuu, i need more mendes content in your posts🥺
also, i just increased the claps from 1 to 10😂

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 9:05 am
  
  😂yes u r that idiot who wants mendes content!
  😝you idiot!! 10 claps! That is just a crazy experiment😂
  Thank you💖💖🥺
  
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  1. Siya Gite
    
    January 13, 2022 at 9:14 am
    
    yesss because mendes is the love of ma lifeee🤭
    i was just having funnnn😂😂
    
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    1. Riya
      
      January 13, 2022 at 9:19 am
      
      🤣🤣🤣
      
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Greg Dennison

January 13, 2022 at 10:16 am

This is beautiful…

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 10:19 am
  
  Thank you🥺
  
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  1. Greg Dennison
    
    January 13, 2022 at 10:27 am
    
    It reminds me of someone I knew once
    
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    1. Riya
      
      January 13, 2022 at 11:39 am
      
      Ohhh.. how did that end up?
      
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      1. Greg Dennison
        
        January 13, 2022 at 11:56 am
        
        We dated off and on for a few months. After our second attempt at being serious, she had a bunch of stuff come up in her life, and she kept having to cancel on me. Finally, after a month of mostly canceled plans, she told me I just can’t be in a relationship with anyone right now, I have too much going on, and I care too much about you to see you keep getting hurt like that…
        
        … and a few weeks after we broke up for good, she was screwing someone else, and didn’t even see why it was a big deal.
        
        After a couple months, and after she broke up with the other guy, we were on good terms again for a while, because she was still friends with all of my friends. But she was a lot more distant during that time, never really saying anything to me other than hi-how-are-you. About a year after the incident, she found a new group of friends and completely ditched us. But for about another year after that, every few months she would message me out of nowhere to ask how I was doing. I’d reply, I’d ask how she was doing, and then I wouldn’t hear anything more from her for another few months. I finally unfriended her from Facebook and Instagram because every time she did try to message me, I would get my hopes up that we might be able to be close again, even if we weren’t romantically involved, and then I’d get disappointed when she wouldn’t reply. I haven’t heard from her in four years, and that’s how I’d like to keep it.
        
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        Riya
        
        January 13, 2022 at 12:38 pm
        
        🥺🥺i am sorry you remembered her because of my poem
        
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        Greg Dennison
        
        January 13, 2022 at 7:32 pm
        
        It’s ok… I just meant I can relate because I’ve been through something like that.
        
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        Riya
        
        January 13, 2022 at 7:38 pm
        
        😅✌🏻okayy
        
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nushhe

January 13, 2022 at 10:20 am

wow this is really nyc, the idea is quite new. I liked it a lot😊

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 11:40 am
  
  Thanks for reading anushka!
  
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akshita1776

January 13, 2022 at 12:28 pm

That was so well written riri!!✨

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 12:38 pm
  
  Thank you akay❤😁
  
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naomiclimateandcats

January 13, 2022 at 5:22 pm

Cool style! I’d never heard of this kind of rhyme scheme, but wow, it’s cool!
And meh, who cares that you messed up the rhymes….. it still sounds good!

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 6:14 pm
  
  Thanks naomi🤍😂
  U haven’t posted much recently
  
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  1. Naomi Domi
    
    January 15, 2022 at 10:16 pm
    
    Of course! Yeah, I know… bloggin spark feels a little low … ?
    
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    1. Riya
      
      January 15, 2022 at 11:28 pm
      
      ohkk.. it can happen.. see u soon though!!
      
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Rupali

January 13, 2022 at 5:30 pm

Amazing pieces.

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 6:14 pm
  
  Thank you ❤
  
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Shruvi Karande

January 13, 2022 at 7:44 pm

This is such a beautiful post!!

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 8:02 pm
  
  thank you s!!!💖✌️
  
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BLEH

January 13, 2022 at 7:55 pm

Uff I-I-I am speechlessss, You already know that you’re my weakness🙂😂
Amd I effin will reply to your texts whatever you say *emoji inserted and you know which one* mah frand crashh paltenher enemhyy axxx😙
The songs😻 *overused was the song of our spotify blend you remember* 🌚🖤

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 8:01 pm
  
  💖💖🥺🥺not all poems are about you(:
  y would i ask you not to respond to my texts when i be spamming your mobile all day🤣🤣🤣
  
  ಠ_ಠ
  
  Of course me remembers.. u sent it to me bf🖤
  
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Rabhya Maini

January 13, 2022 at 9:03 pm

This was so good! I have not heard of this, but a great attempt!

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 9:05 pm
  
  Thank you rabhya😁😁❤
  
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Aaysid

January 13, 2022 at 9:05 pm

These are lovely! Beautifully done!😌

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 9:06 pm
  
  Thank you for reading Aaysid!🤍😁
  
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  1. Aaysid
    
    January 14, 2022 at 10:02 pm
    
    My pleasure. Truly enjoyed.
    
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Aayushi Agrawal

January 13, 2022 at 9:27 pm

Oooo, nice try mah idiot!
That was awesome and also two years do remind me of something special!!😜😁😅

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1. Riya
  
  January 13, 2022 at 9:34 pm
  
  😂💖thanks ash
  no comment on that(:
  
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  1. Aayushi Agrawal
    
    January 13, 2022 at 9:43 pm
    
    Of course, of course😂😂
    
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2. Duo Disseminators
  
  January 13, 2022 at 10:50 pm
  
  uhmmmmmm. Is that what i am thinking?
  ~Kunjal
  
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  1. Aayushi Agrawal
    
    January 13, 2022 at 11:05 pm
    
    😅😅😅 I’m not sure about that. May be kunjal!!😅
    Waise what are you thinking?😅😅
    
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    1. Duo Disseminators
      
      January 13, 2022 at 11:36 pm
      
      THat was ought to be a wise comment from my side😃😂. To jibe at ray!
      You literally spoiled it😂
      
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      1. Riya
        
        January 14, 2022 at 7:08 am
        
        🙄yuh it probably is what you were thinking.🙄stop rubbing it in u guys!!
        
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        Aayushi Agrawal
        
        January 14, 2022 at 3:08 pm
        
        Awwwww😂😂😂
        
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      2. Aayushi Agrawal
        
        January 14, 2022 at 3:07 pm
        
        *Aayushi, the spoiler alert!!*😂😂
        Actually no, Ri is actually, totally, completely irritated with that two years thing!!😂😂
        So our purpose served well🤣🤣
        
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Raksha Mitruka

January 14, 2022 at 12:10 am

Quiet new to me .
You nailed it girl !! 😍😍

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1. Riya
  
  January 14, 2022 at 7:08 am
  
  Thank you Raksha😁🤍🤍
  
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Simran

January 14, 2022 at 10:27 am

Ooooo I reallly like this

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1. Riya
  
  January 14, 2022 at 10:31 am
  
  💖😁
  
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Athira

January 15, 2022 at 12:17 pm

Amazing piece of poem

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1. Riya
  
  January 15, 2022 at 12:19 pm
  
  ty💖
  
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  1. Athira
    
    January 15, 2022 at 1:57 pm
    
    Always welcome Riya
    
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Anand Bose

January 18, 2022 at 4:41 pm

Dear Rya, Beautifully written

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1. Riya
  
  January 18, 2022 at 4:57 pm
  
  Thank you!
  
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Quaranjavirus

January 22, 2022 at 11:37 am

Another kyrielle! Yes,you missed the rhyme scheme,but I like the straightforward way this took me..is it fictional,or is it something you experienced?Just curious. And what’s the prompt “An Internship at Hell” about?Sounds interesting 🙂

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1. Riya
  
  January 22, 2022 at 12:48 pm
  
  *panikkk*
  its non fiction, but exaggerated at most parts…(:
  
  It was a joke that I work for satan and I am evil😈so the prompt an internship at hell came up… but i couldn’t get any further than that😂 if something comes to your mind.. we should do a collab😁
  
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  1. Quaranjavirus
    
    January 22, 2022 at 1:43 pm
    
    Ah well, as some say, “Vibes define everything, if we don’t vibe, we’re not meant for each other”(that’s what tons of people told me!)
    And sure, we could do a collab,you can reach me via gmail with your idea and we could continue from that 🙂
    
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    1. Riya
      
      January 22, 2022 at 3:24 pm
      
      😂cool piece of info!
      
      Yupsssss!
      
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      1. Quaranjavirus
        
        January 22, 2022 at 3:57 pm
        
        Well?Email is quaranjavirus@gmail.com if you’re in for the collab.
        
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