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Changed Perception

The thoughtless days,
Smiling- a remedy,
And the solitary feeling-
Sweet joy.
Teen years old, and you realized,
Smiling’s a miracle,
The truth though is-
Sour pain.

Hiee!! Firstly, Happy Republic Day!!๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’š
I wrote this poem( butterfly cinquain) for this week’s prompt at Tanka Tuesday Challenge hosted by Colleen. The theme was Memories: Sweet and Sour. Hope you like my first challenge!โœŒ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜

26 responses to “Changed Perception”

  1. Absolutely lovely Riya! You nailed it!

    Happy Republic Day!

    1. Thank u!!๐Ÿ’–

      โœŒ๐Ÿปsame to u H!

  2. Amazing poem and Happy Republic Day, Riya!

    1. Thank u ๐Ÿ˜โœŒ๐Ÿป

  3. Awesome poem, dude!โคโค
    Happy republic day, you come under my constitution though๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜œ

    1. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚yass maharani

  4. Wow! This is so awesomely written๐Ÿ’–

    1. Thank you JanโœŒ๏ธ๐Ÿ’–

      1. You are most welcome ๐Ÿ˜Š

  5. Noiceee song๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚Teri tareef krne kaun aaya yaha the song aye haye๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜น Waise aacha likhi as always๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿ–ค

    1. Uppar ke comments waale log๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜น song choose karna bhi kala h! ๐Ÿ˜›

  6. Beautiful poem ! Happy Republic day! Well shared ๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŽ‰โ˜บ

    1. Thank you Priti!!๐Ÿ’–

      1. You are welcome ๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŽ‰โ˜บ

  7. Nice poem!!
    Happy Republic Day!!

    1. Thank you Krisha๐Ÿ’ซ same to you!

  8. Happy republic Day ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. Well played with words… Beautiful poem..

    1. Thank you!๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

  10. Ahhh nice poem!! Iโ€™m late but happy republic day !! :))

    1. Np! Thank you<3 !!!!!!!!

  11. Well written Riya ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿป
    Belated Happy republic day ๐Ÿ‡ฎ๐Ÿ‡ณ

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