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Whirry Morning Notes

Where is Rii? Its been days -.- That idiot better be writing something GOOD. Where does she keep disappearing to? Gone girl!!! hey gone girl!! Where are you?

Silence.

Yup she is definitely lost.

*coughs*
*clears throat*
*sneezes*
*hides her symptoms of fever*

I am HERE!!!!! I was lost on planet SiCkBoI.. but I am here now!! I had a hard time writing this but totally worth it.

My alarm beeps,
To wake me up,
The second one blares,
And I get up.

Water splashes,
As I wash my face,
The brush buzzes,
And scrubs my teeth.

The shower gurgles,
The pipes screech,
And the dryer fan whizzes,
While I get dressed.

I plod through
The havoc in my room,
Snatch homework papers,
Crumple the crap poems,
Crush the empty chips packets,
Shut the whirring laptop,
And shhushh my hissing pet.

Prepared for some kind of battle,
I parade downstairs,
And my grumbling stomach,
Walks me to the fridge.

The door squeaks open,
And my hands dig in,
Bottles clink, 
Pots and pans clash,
A fruit it is I think.

I chomp an apple,
And walk to the couch,
Next door clutter,
As aunty clears up the morning tea,
Kids chit- chatter,
As chotu's school bus arrives,
Motorbikes roar,
As the street's oofy guys take off,
And I look at the note on the coffee table-

“Hey sweetie,
No school for you today,
Please don’t leave the house,
Its not safe.
I will be back after,
I buy you,
your first, brand new,
Hearing aid.”



p.s. I am really sad about the fact that very little people are aware of ISL (indian sign language), how hearing aids work, and how can they provide help to the deaf in our community.
I mean.. I could go deaf tomorrow (based on the time i spend on my earphones 😬😬😬).. I could go deaf and no one would know how to deal with it. tis sad.. wish there was more awareness and someone would teach me ISL.

p.s.s. WHY DO THEY NOT MENTION A SINGLE WORD ABOUT ISL IN OUR SCHOOL BOOKS!!! THAT IS JUST PREPOSTEROUS!!

50 responses to “Whirry Morning Notes”

  1. Fantastic sound imagery and great choice of words, Riya! Loved it!

    1. thank you Harshi!! ✌️🤍
      any title suggestions?

      1. Early morning rhapsody!

        Whirring morning notes!

          1. Biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig hug!

            1. virtual.. six feet apart🤧😷

  2. Fantastic poem, Riya! Loved it!
    You can name it The note on the coffee table or my day.

    1. thank you!!💖
      ahh nice titles Shristi!✌️

  3. Good poem and we’ll she might be writing posts or doing studies

    1. Thanks! And haha that was a rhetorical question.. i was just ill😂

  4. I loved the imagery in the poem! Fantastic Poem, Ri ❤️
    Hope your doing well now.

    1. Aw thanks dhriti!! I am feeling finer!💕✌🏻

  5. Everything is just fabulous and the poem is just wowwwwwwwwww❤❤❤ One of my favourites from now!!
    But
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    .
    .
    The gone girl
    Where is Rii?
    Where she keeps disappearing?
    SickBol planet!

    Credits to Me and Sii!!

    1. 😭🤍thenxxxxxxxx

      LOL yeah credits to u guys👽👽 but i am backk!!!!

  6. heyy gone girl is the name WE gave you😏
    and ahh this poem is soo goood and i liked the titles Srishti suggested…so consider the same from me💃🏻

    BRUHHHH I THOUGHT THIS COMMENT GOT SENT YESTERDAY….I JUST SAW THAT YOU UPDATED THE POST WITH THE TITLE AND I CAME TO THE COMMENTS TO SAY HOW AMAZING IT IS AND I SEE THAT MY YESTERDAY’S COMMENT HASN’T BEEN SENT😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

    1. 😎💖💖thankkkkkku sii

      Lollll…. Idiot

    2. Maine sbse pehle aakr yhi socha tha ki Si ka comment nii h🤣🤣🤣 then I thought pdh rhi hogi!!😅

      1. naii mera comment send nai hua, varna meine kitne pehele comment likha tha, like legit post aaye aaye😭

      2. 🤣🤣🤣🤣haha.. kya padh rhi kya pata.. insta pe stalk karri hogi kisiko

        1. mere paas insta nai hainnnn😭😭

          1. 👀🤦‍♀️go padh dude

  7. This is something unusual!!!!!
    I like it🤩keep it up, gurllllllll🥰

    1. Yass thank you for reading shivakshi🤍😌

  8. Ok,I think this will be a long comment,coz DAMN, this reminds me of one of my own poems! God Riya,I think I’ll go deaf from listening to this magnificently loud poem. Coz it is, magnificently loud. Yet, in the end,it all boils down to being a poem with simple language,about the morning blues of a simple girl(don’t kill me!). A job well done!
    Anyways,that’s long enough 😎😎

    1. 🤩ahhh thank u so muchhhhhh. Can’t kill you😂🤣haven’t mastered screens as a weapon yet..

      🙃tho i asked for an honest opinion.. i think i could have written better.. thanks anyways 💕

      1. That’s the point of simplicity,innit? 😏

  9. ‘SOUNDS’ interesting!!! Amazing👏🧡

    1. Sound pun😂 thank you💕

  10. Poem😌✨ Yeah bimaar aatma…gayab aatma 👽Dumbo be shining here with her blogs🌚🖤

    1. 👽😎💕i am a shining starr

  11. Ooh nice poem!! Loved reading it!!

    1. 🤍✌️thank you for reading!!!!!

  12. Very well written Riya..how are you?

    1. I am better now, thank you for asking!💖🥺

  13. Great poem, and I agree sign language is important and should be taught in school.

    1. 🤧i know right!! I am so frustrated that i don’t know it!

  14. The Indian education system is outdated and completely based on theory. Education that doesn’t make you a good human being and help in real life is useless.

    1. That is true my friend *sigh *

  15. Unusuallyy Fantastic ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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